Umbellicose

How is it that you’re so young and still want to live life?
You have breaths in abundance.
Aren’t you afraid of the world, so cruel?
Well I am.
So I hope that you wont mind when I try and kill you later.
But before that let me tell you everything about life.
Dreaming doesn’t help you in reality.
and sometimes you have to let them tease you a little bit.
even if it makes u cry.
I pray to the lord, that the day never comes
when I fully understand why I took this step.
I will always miss you.
I”m so sorry my son,
but you will never have a birthday.
-Ajay Tawde

P.S: Title credit Sairam Raman..thanks for giving one of the most cherished gifts I have ever owned.

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All rights reserved.

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21 responses

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    January 14, 2014 at 8:20 am

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    January 14, 2014 at 8:19 am

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    January 14, 2014 at 8:17 am

  4. Vijay Patil

    Excellent…what a way to start the blog..Awesome…

    January 5, 2011 at 2:39 pm

  5. hey,

    you have done a marvellous job….
    loved it.

    August 17, 2010 at 2:53 pm

  6. I have already read it before and commented on it. 🙂
    Anyway, I enjoyed reading it second time also. 🙂

    August 11, 2010 at 8:14 pm

    • thanks chandrika..its really great to have you among my blog readers..

      August 27, 2010 at 5:23 pm

  7. Pingback: Your planet or mine. « Umbellicose

  8. Superb creativity! Keep going. Just slipped down by your site while walking towards blogs!:)
    [my poetry site-http://diaryoffreedom.tk/]

    July 12, 2010 at 10:21 pm

    • Thanks a lot Rupam. Thats very encouraging. I checked out your blog read a few posts a well…good job..Hope you like the other posts as well.

      July 21, 2010 at 5:50 pm

  9. Nice one Ajay !
    I am not much in Poems but still liked yours.
    Best Wishes !

    July 11, 2010 at 9:59 pm

    • Hey Abhishek thats a wonderful compliment. Hope you go through the other posts as well.

      July 21, 2010 at 5:52 pm

  10. wow!

    i look forward to your other poems.

    thanks for stopping by my blog.

    i hope you do come by often and let me know about your thoughts on what i scribble!

    July 10, 2010 at 12:37 am

    • Thanks Aman glad you liked it. Have written a lot more will be posting soon.
      Will check out more stuff soon thanks.

      July 21, 2010 at 5:53 pm

  11. Beautiful, just like the other poems that you’ve posted. Keep writing. 🙂

    July 8, 2010 at 7:24 pm

    • Thanks for the encouragement..a lot more to come soon.. 🙂

      July 8, 2010 at 10:19 pm

  12. Hey thanks a lot Chandrika..Hope u can check out other posts as well..:)

    July 8, 2010 at 5:54 pm

  13. Template is good! 🙂
    The first post is really nice. I enjoyed reading it. 🙂

    Best wishes. 🙂

    July 8, 2010 at 5:49 pm

  14. Hey thanks a lot aashith that means a lot…

    July 4, 2010 at 2:18 pm

  15. Stumbled onto your blog, fantastic thought process… Keep up the the good work buddy..

    July 3, 2010 at 10:41 pm

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